Tuesday, June 16, 2009

Blog Challenge-Day Sixteen-"P"

P-Poetry

Probably many of my readers will not be surprised at today’s blog topic.  Since I was a little girl, one of my recurring dreams has been to be a published poet.  From Robert Lewis Stevenson to G. K. Chesterton, from Emily Dickinson to Christina Rosetti, I have always loved both reading and writing poetry.  My first love was the structured rhyme and rhythm of the monthly memorized poems in elementary school.  As I grew older and my writing matured slightly, I still clung to the form and security that metered and rhymed poetry provided, agonizing over finding the perfect word with the perfect syllable count.  But in the spring of my Inklings year, I discovered T. S. Eliot, seemingly defying all structure and form.  However, the more I read and listened and allowed his melodies to sink in, the more I grew to love Eliot’s poetry, painting vivid images in my mind of trees and roses and dusty chapels and whirling worlds.  His poetry has come to affect mine, as lately my poetry has been more concerned with image and emotion than structure.  In conclusion, here are two of my poems, reflecting both sides of the same coin of poetry.


Slave to Love 

Your Love is Strong, compassionate

Your Mercies, Neverending

You see all, Yet Love me still

So I can cease Pretending 


To be a girl with Heart too pure

To ever need Your Aid

Instead I come with Pleading Soul

Longing to be Saved


From the Secret Shames I hide away

From the Guilt within my Heart

Your Love is Strong, it covers me.

Love’s pierced me with His Dart


I’m now a slave, I will do nothing

Unless You bid me to.

Love freed my Heart, I can choose my Fate

But I Love You, I Choose You.



Panes of Glass

He stares at her through a broken pane of glass,

His eyes reflect the sorrow in his heart

Around him his world is falling, breaking

Yet there is no one to stop it, no one to heal the pain

Slowly ever slowly, his heart is being torn away

Ripped into shreds and trampled underfoot

Yet all this and more he would endure for her

He would shatter the panes of glass

That stand between them, and yet

He cannot, for to do so would bring infinitely more pain,

So he stands, staring out of helpless, hopeless eyes

Hating the one who said forbidden fruit was sweet

It is not, it is bitter, dry, full of pain and anguish

Yet he has chosen to eat of it still

For that is the way of love

Love reaches through the glass and into her heart

Is this right?  Is this good?  They don’t know

Self-inflicted torture, unspeakable bliss and joy

And as they love silently, hopefully, fervently

The cracks deepen, the ice thaws, and someday

The glass will come crashing down

And they will be...


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